1 - Awesome, Tad boring, becky and jessie should be in it. more moving shots.
Reply - Awesome we know, becky and jessie would ruin it, but the idea of moving shots we have considered in the past and we will see how filming goes to weather we use any or not.
2 - Fair, shots rather padestian, good cut with beat, song a little repetative (not your fault though)
Reply - Fair? if the explanation was read then you would have read that there will be more shots, more varied which will in turn lead to more cutting and a faster pace. True song pace is not our fault ask Supergrass about that.
3 - The use of the foot was good (make sure it's in beat) needs more interesting shots, less repetition, try not to have too many shots of necks or chests etc.
Reply - Thank you for the foot comment, when filming i did not have the song so i could not keep in beat and it's a rough go at it anyway. Shots will vary more once again if explanation was read you would know this, the shots of random and unused body parts is an influence we have taken from an actual music video director and it will add a different dimension to the performance and goes against conventions, which is what we are going for. How obvious would it be to do the same as every other performance video?
4 - Like the mixof real action/animatic, nice one boys.
Reply - Thank you, just a little something we decided to do for your viewing pleasure.
5 - 3 way split shot was good, good range of shots.
Reply - This is the feedback we like. The 3 way shot was josh's idea and should work very well, so 1 nil Josh, and there will be even more shot variation so cheers.
6 - Reapeated shots? Good ideas.
Reply - We did explain but thanks for the concern nd thanks for the praise.